Scandal -Complete-

[Skippy]

Scandal

The proverb warns that, "You should not bite the hand that feeds you." But maybe you should, if it prevents you from feeding yourself.

{ name } Scandal
{ species } Black Fox
{ gender } Reynard
{ age } Four Years
{ loyalty } Outsider
{ orientation } Straight
{ power } Scandal has the power of poison in any bite. Which aids when taking down any kind of prey he has found. He does use this power when fighting, but it only helps too wear down the victim and make them ill. He tries when fighting with other foxes to avoid this strength, but sometimes he just can't help it.

{ height } twelve inches
{ weight } five pounds
{ build } Scandal is a rather handsome fox. has the regular build of a fox, except being slightly larger and more muscular. Though his strength is not very visible, he has compact and very built muscles underneath.
{ coat } Scandal's coat is varies from season to season, as shown in his picture, he is still shedding off his thick grey winter coat for a solid black one. As all foxes, his white tipped tail is long and very bushy, and is usually, for him, dragging lifelessly behind him. Unless agitated or excited.
{ eyes } Scandal has a quite round and unique set of hues. Their color is a dark soothing brown, he can comfort anyone with the relaxing tone he shows through those eyes.
{ other } Scandal doesn't have much abnormalities in appearance, yet there is a hidden something underneath his good looking self. He has one birth defect, a very minor one thank goodness. He was born with a small fragment in his left shoulder, it doesn't do him much harm, but once in a while it'll cause him to trip in heavy activity.

{ likes }
Flirting
Swimming
Grooming
{ dislikes }
Dogs
Sleeping in
Humans
{ strengths }
Charm
Happy go lucky spirit
{ weaknesses }
Quick temper
Lack of self-knowledge
{ hopes } That he will someday be able to fly, and that one day he would find a true loyal mate
{ fears } That he might be caught gambling (yesh, Scandal is one unique foxy)
{ habits } gambling : P
{ secrets } Shhh...He has a flea infestation
{ attitude } Scandal is like a teenager. Bottom line. He thinks he has the world on a platter, and unfortunately he often is smart enough to back up his reasoning, even if it is a little... warped. He loves getting into social groups, if only for the reason to be the comic relief. He thinks that every conversation needs a witty remark, and very rarely cannot go without making some sort of comment on anything anyone brings up. And he usually comes across as a jerk while he’s doing it. A harmless little flirt this fella is, he can easily charm his way into any vixen's unsuspecting heart. He is very belligerent, and will not respect authority if he is scoffed at by it, nothing bothers him more than a prideful and civilized bore. Those like that annoy him very much. On top of his complex personality, Scandal still is a naturally adventurous and cheerful fox, he can never stick to any place for too long, so he finds himself not sticking to others as well. As mentioned before, he has a lack of self knowledge, he thinks he's as powerful as an Ox, which makes him get into trouble, kind of...Alot.

{ parents } Deceased
{ siblings } His big brother Radar six years and Scandal has no idea where he is
{ lovers } If by lovers you mean mate, then he has none, cmon, he's just a player
{ kits } None
{ others } He has alot of guy pals, mostly from his gamble games
{ events } Scandal doesn't consider his history to be anything of much importance. Him and his brother were an accident, their mother's mistake, as it were. Not that anyone even told him this, it was just his opinion on the matter. It didn't bother him much. He was perfectly content when it was just him and Radar, since their mother had left them once they were weaned.
They were doing just fine on their own, they made their own den like their mother had taught them, he guessed she was just teaching them how to survive on their own since she would be leaving them. Anyway, back to the boring history. Here are the facts, Radar wandered off on his own, Scandal was sad but then got over it and learned to fend for himself, and then he turned out to what he is today. The end.

{ name } Skippy, or Skip
{ experience } 4 Years, I'm pretty good at RPing, if I do say so myself ^^
{ characters } one so far, but more to come
{ codeword } checked by staffers
{ roleplay example } A quiet and long sigh slipped through the air hopefully unheard by a certain unsuspecting rabbit, his muscles flexed underneath him, tail in the air slightly, deep brown hues determined to eat this night. "You are mine, hehehe."

[/b] A paw lurched forward slowly, trying avoid twigs and dead leaves as much as possible. But with this weather, he couldn't get a decent meal for days. The forest, yes, the hardest place to hunt for this fox, he couldn't even take one lousy step without being noticed. The handsome reynard's ears flicked behind him as another pile of leaves suddenly dropped to the ground. He didn't move a muscle and stayed focused on his target. The rabbit didn't have such an attention span, it turned it's head around. Frozen and on it's long kind legs, Scandal saw this as he perfect opportunity to strike. There he went, his own hind legs sprouting him high in the air, he knew this would be his first meal for days, his heart pounded in anticipation for the living food to be caught in his open arms. Buuut, it didn't turn out so well, there he was, in the air, knowing he would finally eat, only to come back down with a crash. His tail barley flopped over his head, "Ahh f*** it!" His eyes narrowed at the rear end of the rabbit, bounding away for it's dear life. The black fox rolled his eyes then winced as he rose up from his fall, again his stupid left shoulder was acting up. He growled a short rough sound and shook off loosen himself up a bit. Scandal sighed and walked on his way, ofcourse, he had no idea where the heck he was going, but all he wanted was some action, something to do, anything to entertain him.
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[reckless]

Please don't be discouraged by any of this, I just want to help you out C:

First, you've seemed to have messed up the coding a lot. Things that are supposed to be bold aren't.. etc. You forgot an asterisk as well. I cannot accept Scandal until that is fixed.

There's a few spelling errors in personality you could fix as well. As well as some grammar errors in the History. Maybe you could go and fix some of that up while you fix the coding. C:

Also, I was wondering what's with the "haha" and "ehh" in your roleplay example? They kind of seem irrelevant to what you were writing at the time. It seems more as if you're "talking" instead of roleplaying. We obviously love added flair, I do that quite a bit myself, but they don't seem to match up and they seem a bit less artistic and a bit more of a hindrance where they are placed.

Usually when I add flair similar to that, I add it when they're almost thinking but not quite. Uhh, I think it'll be better if I add something I wrote as an example to help you out a bit:

so was he here about him- or was he just making a poor attempt at communicating with him? ugh- he didn't quite like when foxes acted like this, it was so confusing... so he'd probably need to whip out the good `ol rex charm to get more answers.

See how he's 'almost' thinking, and not really doing any actions?

I hope this helps a bit, sorry for the delay in Scandal's acceptance!

[Skippy]

Woops, sorry, didn't see the coding errors, guess I was just in a rush Anyway, fixed the coding and RP sample

[reckless]

Sorry, I forgot to mention about the eyes, there are no weird colors allowed on here :c I'm sorryyy! Dx

[Skippy]

xD it's alright, edited it

[reckless]